So..."The Midland Specter" by David Prill? It's good and stuff. Something of a ghost story, though the Specter itself is never clearly defined, and it gets creepier as Prill moves the story along.
I wanted to know more. More about the Specter (much more!), more about Jack and Emma, and even more about the small town of Midland. Just wanted more.
The story does end a bit abruptly, but it's still worth reading.